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Wednesday, December 14, 2011

My Version of Cinderella lol.

I'm just in the mood for blogging. Maybe I should.... write story? Hehehe.

You sure have heard about Cinderella with her evil stepmother and ugly stepsisters. There was a prince who was trying to find true love but Cinderella couldn't go to the ball and there's fairy godmother.

Oh screw them, I'm telling my own story. Which is more MAKE SENSE. ;D


Once upon a time, there was a girl. Her name was Annabella. She was the daughter of one of the most richest man. Her parents was the most good-looking in the town; George and Helena Reed. Her mother was the finest, loveliest and the beautiful woman.

Unfortunately, her mum died when Annabella was in age 5. Her father was so sad and for the first time, he cried. Cried because his most beloved girl died. Now, he only had Annabella. He raised Annabella alone since then.

When Annabella was eleven, there was a beautiful widow named Victoria Eddington who was crazy about George. She had two daughters named Olivia and Diana. Her daughters were, yes, gorgeous but arrogant with their beauty and snobby. They were full of evil, because of their mother.

George thought Annabella need a mother and Victoria's daughters can be his daughter's friends. He was so pity of Annabella as she always talked to mice and cat. So George decided to take Victoria as his wife.

Since the first met of Victoria and her daughters with Annabella, they only know her name as Ella and called her Cinderella as they'd always see Annabella sat in cinder, reading books.

After couple of weeks, before George wanted to go work, he asked his wife and his daughters if they wanted something. Victoria wanted pearl, Olivia wanted new dress and diamonds while Diana wanted golds and new dresses. Only Annabella asked his father, she wanted a new book. Olivia and Diana just looked at her and whispered to each other, "What a bloody freak she is!" and Victoria sighed and said, "Oh girls, stop saying bloody. Act like a lady." And they were like.. *flips hair*.

Annabella started to feel unwell.

"Cinderella!"

Annabella rolled her eyes. "I'm Annabella," she muttered. But Victoria didn't hear. "What is it...?"

"Call me Vicky."

Annabella widened her eyes. What kind of name was that?

"..Or Tori."

Even worse! "What kind of name is that?" sh accidentally said it.

Victoria narrowed her eyes and looked at Annabella. "What did you just say?"

Fearless as she was, she said, "I'm saying what a weird name that was. I mean like, seriously."

Victoria rolled her eyes. "I'm bored of the name Victoria! Since I was young, people call me, Victoria! Victoria! I need... shorter name, you know, Cinderella?"

Annabella looked at her stepmother. "You can call me Ella but you complicate things by calling Cinderella." She raised an eyebrow.

"You're right." Victoria nodded. "What the hell was I-"

"You're swearing."

"Bloody-"

"Again."

Victoria took a deep breath. 'Okay, no swearing. Act like a lady.' She cleared her throat. "Cindy,"

'Not related to my name at all.' Annabella muttered. "What."

"Go do chores! What are you doing? Reading? In cinders? Oh god, Cinderella, you are weird! I'm giving you order now and you must respect me because I am your father's wife!" Of course, she won't admit that she was Annabella's mother. Oops, stepmother.

"Fine, stepmother."

Suddenly there was a knock.

"Let me get it! Maybe daddy!" Olivia ran to the door.

"No no! Let me get it! I want my dress!" Diana pushed Olivia.

Annabella pushed both of them and opened the door.

"Is this Reed's mansion?" a man who knocked the door asked.

'Pfft, he is not handsome. So not daddy.' Olivia muttered.

Diana rolled her eyes. "Obviously not." Diana whispered.

"Yes, may I help you?" asked Annabella.

The man cleared his throat. "I have a bad news here. Are you girls Lord Reed's daughters?"

"Who is that? Hello, may I know who are you?" Suddenly Victoria was behind the girls.

"You must be Lady Reed. Milady, I'm afraid I have a bad news. I hope you're strong enough to hear this."

"Oh, try me. Where is my husband?"

"He.... was murdered."

"Murdered?" asked Olivia and Diana.

Annabella was surprised. Murdered? Who would though of murdering her dear father? "By who?"

The man swallowed. "We don't know. Now, I'm, uh, I'm so sorry for all of you to hear this..."

"Mother, what's with father? Tell us!" said Diana.

Victoria was startled. George died?

"But, milady, we found this with him." The man gave a book.

Victoria took it. Cinderella's. "Cinderella."

Annabella stepped forward. "Yes?"

"Yours." She threw the book to her and it hit Annabella's face.

Annabella took the book slowly. Her eyes began to watery and slowly shed tears. Her father was gone. Forever. Who would killed her dearly father?

"Look, Cinderella, look! It was all your fault! He only bought a book for you before he was murdered. I hate you, little bitch." Victoria tried to not shed tears and lifted her head. "Girls, let's go. Cinderella, go do the chores! Now!"

Diana and Olivia rolled their eyes at Annabella and followed their mum.


To be continued hahahaha.

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